Where were you?



Where were you?

Where were you?
When they cut the cord,
in the local hospital ward
where were you on the day ,
when they took mummy away

Where were you ?
When I moved from home to home poor child, all alone
where were you on the mornings, when the grey skies were yawning, and my feet pounding
as I ran from the scoldings

Where were you ?
when I screamed?
when every time
it was not what it seemed

Where were you
when I cried?
when every time
I LIED

Where were you?
on the day
they threw the keys away
as I wiped my tears,
no more fears
FINALLY
someone hears
Where were you, Dad? Where were you?

About this poem

The poem is about a girl talking to her dad , asking him why he was never in her life . Her mother died when she was very young and she was traveling from foster home to foster home. She finally found her life long family but they were verbally , physically and sexually abusive which in the end comes to stop when they get locked away in prison.

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Written on February 09, 2022

Submitted by oppermankeesha on February 18, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

44 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme A Abbcc Axxd AeFe AgFg Accddxda
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 623
Words 147
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 4, 4, 4, 8

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