Ocean rise

Kerjean rithal 2004 (Victoria hospital carries , st lucia)



Blue waves lashing the bay
Rough at nights but calm at day
Listen to it's sweet melody
As it's tides rise and fall musically

The whimpers of those who lost their souls
still linger under the ocean in mourns
The cries of whales and fishes in caves
Echoes within the ground and grows into waves

About this poem

It's about comparing emotion to the sea

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Written on June 27, 2019

Submitted by Rufinarithalclery on February 16, 2023

Modified on March 08, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XXCC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 299
Words 62
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4

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