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Present_future

Mera_aks 2003 (Jharkhand)

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I'm loosing myself in the darkness of my mind
Sometimes i feel like i just wanna hide
But the way I'm looking for
Is too far to find
Everytime I think of myself, I think
What I'm doing, what's going on
I'm going on & on without knowing more
Just went to find something
Thought i might find a link
I'mma going to write something
But I ran out of ink
Looking for more ways
It's all for my own sake
Someone come and ask me
What I'm trying to make
What I'm trying to make....
   
                                              Bhavna

About this poem

The poem is about struggle in finding the right path to walk on, about the darkness in life we've to go through. We just try to find ways but we couldn't find the right one, but we must continue to walk because that's how life is.

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Written on August 19, 2003

Submitted by 1909bhavnakumari on January 17, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abcadecfdfdghiHH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 528
Words 99
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
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