Analysis of Present_future
I'm loosing myself in the darkness of my mind
Sometimes i feel like i just wanna hide
But the way I'm looking for
Is too far to find
Everytime I think of myself, I think
What I'm doing, what's going on
I'm going on & on without knowing more
Just went to find something
Thought i might find a link
I'mma going to write something
But I ran out of ink
Looking for more ways
It's all for my own sake
Someone come and ask me
What I'm trying to make
What I'm trying to make....
| Scheme | abcadecfdfdghiHH |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11010010111 0111111101 1011101 11111 10111111 11101101 1101101101 111110 111101 1101110 111111 10111 111111 11011 111011 111011 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 528 |
| Words | 99 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 16 |
| Lines Amount | 16 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 360 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 96 |
About this poem
The poem is about struggle in finding the right path to walk on, about the darkness in life we've to go through. We just try to find ways but we couldn't find the right one, but we must continue to walk because that's how life is.
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Written on August 19, 2003
Submitted by 1909bhavnakumari on January 17, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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