Just tell me where it hurts.

Amber lee 1992 (French camp)



Just tell me where it hurts.
If you tell me where it hurts
And let my hands feel you.
I can help relieve the pain.
I don’t want you to suffer,
You can use me to find some respite.
But we both know never a complete recover.
You’ve survived every break.
Mine usually only inflicted during night slumber.
With you I could feel free.
Until my body gets a REM opportunity
I'm emotional,
Your a survivor,
Just tell me where it hurts.
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Written on December 17, 2022

Submitted by Kae.king1221 on December 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AabcdedfdgghdA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 433
Words 93
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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