Analysis of Just tell me where it hurts.

Amber lee 1992 (French camp)



Just tell me where it hurts.
If you tell me where it hurts
And let my hands feel you.
I can help relieve the pain.
I don’t want you to suffer,
You can use me to find some respite.
But we both know never a complete recover.
You’ve survived every break.
Mine usually only inflicted during night slumber.
With you I could feel free.
Until my body gets a REM opportunity
I'm emotional,
Your a survivor,
Just tell me where it hurts.


Scheme AabcdedfdgghdA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111111 011111 1110101 1111110 111111110 111110001010 1011001 110001001010110 111111 011101010100 10100 10010 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 433
Words 93
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 331
Words per stanza (avg) 82
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Written on December 17, 2022

Submitted by Kae.king1221 on December 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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