Wailing Wall
I was in Jerusalem
some miles from a town
where you vacationed
I had to be at the wailing wall …
For a personal matter, a grievance
God spoke to me there, demanding my devotion
that I promised you
God has vowed to me what most wished for
but no mention of you
God has warned eternity in hell for me
But regretting not having you is harder
God said he created us beautifully…
all I see is my ugliness, and sprinkled in you are my given senses
God has miracles, but only if he believes
Only if he’s fair,
a balance of your fulfilling beauty,
my old age, my saturated ugliness, a symmetry of art
God said I’m free, but I’m singled out as incomplete
I'm the weakened one, created for your leisure
Debating God the subject of you
I ruptured defending you for me,
Our wishes and demands colliding
I’m not sacrificing anything
I’m walking away from a stalemate
Taking my chances with you
We’ll talk about how to save me
A rescue or rebirth...
not at the wailing wall in Jerusalem,
But at the redemption wall of your heart
somewhere in L.A.
About this poem
negotiation & rage of what I'm getting and what i deserve from God
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Written on October 20, 2022
Submitted by azdi404 on December 29, 2022
Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AXX XX XB XB CD CX XXCE XD BCFF XBCX AEX |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,075 |
Words | 225 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 2, 4, 4, 3 |
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