Out of my head



Tired and weak, yet struggling to sleep
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

Withdrawn and emotionless, I feel boxed in
Drowning in sorrow, shame and estranged
I know it’s not right but
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

I fake my existence for my family subsistence
If it was only me, it’d be simple to be free
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

Short tempered, grumpy and blunt
I hate who I’ve become, negative,  pessimistic -  a complete and utter
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

Purpose is process, belonging has fled
Who am I, what is this, everything has changed
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

Strangers pass by, the world goes on
We are mere mortals, passing through
Does it matter how long, the end is the same
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head
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Submitted by Low_guy on November 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xA xbxA xxA xxA abA xxxA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 840
Words 172
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 3, 3, 3, 4

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