Analysis of Out of my head



Tired and weak, yet struggling to sleep
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

Withdrawn and emotionless, I feel boxed in
Drowning in sorrow, shame and estranged
I know it’s not right but
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

I fake my existence for my family subsistence
If it was only me, it’d be simple to be free
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

Short tempered, grumpy and blunt
I hate who I’ve become, negative,  pessimistic -  a complete and utter …
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

Purpose is process, belonging has fled
Who am I, what is this, everything has changed
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head

Strangers pass by, the world goes on
We are mere mortals, passing through
Does it matter how long, the end is the same
I can’t get these thoughts out of my head


Scheme xA xbxA xxA xxA abA xxxA
Poetic Form
Metre 1001110011 111111111 01011110 100101001 111111 111111111 11101011100010 1111011110111 111111111 1101001 111101100010001010 111111111 101101011 1111111011 111111111 10110111 11110101 11101101101 111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 840
Words 172
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 3, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by Low_guy on November 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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