Heavenly abode
And just like that you were gone in the blink of an eye
When I stood there all alone, those eyes still gazing at the sky
I stood there all shook
Watching my mom cry as much as she could
All I could think was that time passes like a fly
All I thought was you would never be near
But still it seems like you will always be there
My heart still aches to feel your presence
But I know how hard I cry it won't affect the present
I will always be desperate to hear
Your comforting voice behind my tears
It feels like a nightmare
I hope you can hear those sheer tears
Being proud of me that no matter what I am never scared
These eyes still try to see those friendly fights
Still wants you to be in the sight
No matter how hard I try
I will still thrive for those hugs and cry
About this poem
Written expressing all those desires of a daughter who lost her father and considers poems to be an escape mechanism to calm herself down
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Written on November 25, 2022
Submitted by yashitakumar12 on November 24, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AABCADEFGHIEIJKLAA |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 798 |
Words | 172 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 18 |
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