Heavenly abode

Yashita 2004 (Delhi)



And just like that you were gone in the blink of an eye
When I stood there all alone, those eyes still gazing at the sky
I stood there all shook
Watching my mom cry as much as she could
 All I could think was that time passes like a fly
 All I thought was you would never be near
 But still it seems like you will always be there
 My heart still aches to feel your presence
 But I know how hard I cry it won't affect the present
 I will always be desperate to hear
 Your comforting voice behind my tears
 It feels like a nightmare
 I hope you can hear those sheer tears
Being proud of me that no matter what I am never scared
 These eyes still try to see those friendly fights
  Still wants you to be in the sight
  No matter how hard I try
   I will still thrive for those hugs and cry

About this poem

Written expressing all those desires of a daughter who lost her father and considers poems to be an escape mechanism to calm herself down

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Written on November 25, 2022

Submitted by yashitakumar12 on November 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABCADEFGHIEIJKLAA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 798
Words 172
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

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Hi there yashita this side.I am a passionate writer.For me poems are a way to express those innermost feelings that occupy my mind most of the times it's a way to relax myself and enlighten my mood a little more…

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