Breeze of feel

Vedika 2006 (Kota)



I know that I don't own you
And perhaps I never will
So my anger when you are with her
I have no right to feel

I know that you don't owe me
And I shouldn't ask for more
I shouldn't feel so let it down
All the time we didn't talk

What I feel I shouldn't show you
So when you are around I would not
I know I have no right to feel it
But it doesn't mean I don't

I thought......what real pain feels like
But I don't until I saw the way you look at her
I don't know why I'm still hoping

Will you think of me tonight or
Will I be just another girl

About this poem

This poem is about one-sided love

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Written on July 04, 2022

Submitted by Vedikahada51 on September 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBX XCXX AXXX XBX CX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 556
Words 135
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3, 2

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