Analysis of Breeze of feel

Vedika 2006 (Kota)



I know that I don't own you
And perhaps I never will
So my anger when you are with her
I have no right to feel

I know that you don't owe me
And I shouldn't ask for more
I shouldn't feel so let it down
All the time we didn't talk

What I feel I shouldn't show you
So when you are around I would not
I know I have no right to feel it
But it doesn't mean I don't

I thought......what real pain feels like
But I don't until I saw the way you look at her
I don't know why I'm still hoping

Will you think of me tonight or
Will I be just another girl


Scheme AXBX XCXX AXXX XBX CX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 0011101 111011110 111111 1111111 0110111 11011111 1011101 11111011 111101111 111111111 1110111 111111 1110111011110 11111110 11111011 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 556
Words 135
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

This poem is about one-sided love

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Written on July 04, 2022

Submitted by Vedikahada51 on September 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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