The shell of the city



The shell of the city, seemingly more alive and farther away.
Hierarchy of ordered details, collages.
What life there’s left is in your luggage.

On the walls, the tangled shadows teach you to dance
and the memory of the night at the club floats yolkily.

It relaxes, yet not inside you. Something curled up
like a fist stays there.
You’ve mentally retreated from the roadside.

On wikipedia somebody puts it nicely:
In joy, the facial expression changes,
the eyes start to shine and the face becomes serene.

How?
Forget the questions, you’re with us now.

A much too contextually-preoccupied prediction,
tripping on patterns, reserved and dreamy ballerina,
somehow immaculate,
the fly struggles in the net with an electrical buzz.
Set it free so it can fall flat on the floor.

We listen to the same music at least for show.
Here’s the initiative for what’s broken,
may it work like a charm next time.

About this poem

This is a poem from Satao, volume published by Radu Nitescu at Max Blecher Publishing House, Romania, 2020, translated into English by Mihnea Arion.

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XA XXX ABX CC DXXBX XDX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 913
Words 178
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 3, 3, 2, 5, 3

Radu Nitescu

Radu Nițescu was born in 1992, in Bucharest, where he lives ever since. He published his first poetry book, gringo (printed by Casa de pariuri literare) in 2012. Four years later, his second book, Dialectica urșilor (printed by Casa de Editură Max Blecher) appeared. It has received the best poetry book of the year prize offered by the reading club Nepotu' lui Thoreau. He published Satao, his third poetry book in 2020, for which he was declared Young Writer of the Year in Romania (prize awarded by Agenția de carte). Some of his poems have been translated in English, German, Bulgarian, Turkish and Jewish. more…

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