Love...no!

Donaldy Alexandre 1983 (Port-au-Prince)



Love: Live...ok.
Myself: Love...no!

You were my rhythm,
You were my sound
You were my race,
You were what I felt
Without you there were nothing;
I can sin
Left in sand, worst then I knew
Nothing is new,
You were my sight
You were my path,
Life was You
Without you can not see;
Living's in vain,
Without you there is just pain
Can not breath,
Love why? Love why me?
If you were a being,
My answer is still...no!

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How I felt when I fell out of love

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Written on June 22, 2022

Submitted by donaldy_a on June 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AB XXXXABBBXXXCBBXCAB
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 411
Words 97
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 18

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