Analysis of Love...no!

Donaldy Alexandre 1983 (Port-au-Prince)



Love: Live...ok.
Myself: Love...no!

You were my rhythm,
You were my sound
You were my race,
You were what I felt
Without you there were nothing;
I can sin
Left in sand, worst then I knew
Nothing is new,
You were my sight
You were my path,
Life was You
Without you can not see;
Living's in vain,
Without you there is just pain
Can not breath,
Love why? Love why me?
If you were a being,
My answer is still...no!


Scheme AB XXXXABBBXXXCBBXCAB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 11 11 10110 1011 1011 10111 0111010 111 1011111 1011 1011 1011 111 011111 101 0111111 111 11111 110010 11011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 411
Words 97
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 18
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 41

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How I felt when I fell out of love

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Written on June 22, 2022

Submitted by donaldy_a on June 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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