Its Cold



No matter the layers,
I freeze.
The pain is unappealing.

Air punching at my throat,
full force.
Wind is great for consumption.

The pain of laying.
Bones crack, shift, pop.
Spine hurts, ribs dig, legs weak.

Why can't I stop?

About this poem

This poems about my struggle with anorexia, it embarrassing to tell people but I want to get help so I write about it a lot. Writing makes me feel seen.

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Written on March 23, 2022

Submitted by Finnyboy on May 07, 2022

Modified on March 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXA XXX ABX B
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 226
Words 52
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 1

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