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Traumatic Congestion

Blaquemisery 1975 (Los Angeles)

Slate cleaned innocently damaged
enough to hold crying hurt pain in
Uncomplicated to communicate
the distress of blood that happened under my dress

Scared and frightened of the
consequences it will be against, so I move around my family humbly

Growing up with days moving fast right before my eyes
The woman that birth me 10 yrs ago passed
I wasn't strong enough for this shit to happen to me
My anger against anybody raise an extra 1000 degrees.....(cont)
 
   
   

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The poem was written to vent out anger and pain that persist.

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Written on March 26, 2022

Submitted by Blaquemisery on April 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXX XB XXBA
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 471
Words 87
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 4
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