Analysis of Traumatic Congestion
Blaquemisery 1975 (Los Angeles)
Slate cleaned innocently damaged
enough to hold crying hurt pain in
Uncomplicated to communicate
the distress of blood that happened under my dress
Scared and frightened of the
consequences it will be against, so I move around my family humbly
Growing up with days moving fast right before my eyes
The woman that birth me 10 yrs ago passed
I wasn't strong enough for this shit to happen to me
My anger against anybody raise an extra 1000 degrees.....(cont)
| Scheme | AXXX XB XXBA |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Etheree (20%) |
| Metre | 11100010 011110110 01001010 001111101011 101010 1001110111101110010 1011110110111 0101111011 11010111111011 1100110001110011 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 471 |
| Words | 87 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 3 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 2, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 10 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
| Words per line (avg) | 8 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 123 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
About this poem
The poem was written to vent out anger and pain that persist.
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Written on March 26, 2022
Submitted by Blaquemisery on April 27, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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