Barefoot

Laela mj 2003 (Batang)



Circle life never get tired to
Make me feel desire , anger
Those are variable of circumstances
Sometime spread a part of plan
Bunch of memorie get drown
And here I stand, facing tomorrow
Unexpected journey stretched
in this chaotic wide eyes
Slow down, hestitated on every step
A little bit nervous perhaps
But it wont stop a strong faith
Cuz liberal soul always behind
Like walking on thightrope
I get used to feel as complex





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I dont know how tto describe but pov it just me right now, teenage life at the edge of 18

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Submitted by Elrose_ on November 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLIM
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 433
Words 81
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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