Analysis of Barefoot

Laela mj 2003 (Batang)



Circle life never get tired to
Make me feel desire , anger
Those are variable of circumstances
Sometime spread a part of plan
Bunch of memorie get drown
And here I stand, facing tomorrow
Unexpected journey stretched
in this chaotic wide eyes
Slow down, hestitated on every step
A little bit nervous perhaps
But it wont stop a strong faith
Cuz liberal soul always behind
Like walking on thightrope
I get used to feel as complex


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLIM
Poetic Form
Metre 101101101 11101010 1110001100 110111 11111 01111001 010101 0101011 11111001 01011001 1111011 11001101 11011 11111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 433
Words 81
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 348
Words per stanza (avg) 76

About this poem

I dont know how tto describe but pov it just me right now, teenage life at the edge of 18

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Submitted by Elrose_ on November 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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