If love could save you



The day I first saw you
Is the day I lost you I held you so close
Never wanted you to go.

My eyes filled with tears
My heart so broke
I also wrote you a little note.

If love would have saved you
God would have never
Taken you.

Everyday I feel you hear
All so calm, beautiful and
Dear.

I miss you and love you
I wish I can see you
Just to tell you how much we love you
And needed you hear

I dont know how to be strong
When all I do is fall
All so weak and sad

Know you are a sweet
Beautiful angle watching
Over your family
With so much love.

Awayls reamber your mom
Loves you so much
I Awayls have hope.



By, Gwen Vanessa Grim

About this poem

About my daughter that had passed away a while ago but it Awayls feel as if it happend a day ago.

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Written on November 18, 2021

Submitted by gwen_g on November 20, 2021

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXX XXX AXA BXX AAAB XXX XXXX XXX X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 639
Words 156
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 1

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