If love could save you
The day I first saw you
Is the day I lost you I held you so close
Never wanted you to go.
My eyes filled with tears
My heart so broke
I also wrote you a little note.
If love would have saved you
God would have never
Taken you.
Everyday I feel you hear
All so calm, beautiful and
Dear.
I miss you and love you
I wish I can see you
Just to tell you how much we love you
And needed you hear
I dont know how to be strong
When all I do is fall
All so weak and sad
Know you are a sweet
Beautiful angle watching
Over your family
With so much love.
Awayls reamber your mom
Loves you so much
I Awayls have hope.
By, Gwen Vanessa Grim
About this poem
About my daughter that had passed away a while ago but it Awayls feel as if it happend a day ago.
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Written on November 18, 2021
Submitted by gwen_g on November 20, 2021
Modified on March 26, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AXX XXX AXA BXX AAAB XXX XXXX XXX X |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 639 |
Words | 156 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 1 |
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