Heart ache

sage wrobel 2001 (NY)



Why try to love
When everytime you love your given the shove
You try to be strong
Just to be proven wrong

A mask is what you put on
For everyone to look upon
No one can tell the difference
Because all they are feeling is indifference

No one really cares if your hurting
Its why with people you are always averting
To love is to be hurt
So you must be on high alert

Heart ache is the worst
Makes you feel like your cursed
There's no cure for heart ache
You don't even get a break

One heart ache comes with many more
Its kinda like a war
There is no winning
So you feel like your endlessly spinning

Heart ache is never easy
It always makes you feel uneasy
The pain goes away
But ends up coming back another day

Heart ache is painful
In a ways its shameful

About this poem

I wrote this poem because my best friend had her heart broken and i felt motivated to write about it

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Written on July 24, 2021

Submitted by princesss.66989 on July 24, 2021

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIEE JJKK LL
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 728
Words 152
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

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  • Gabber
    Very true
    LikeReply2 years ago

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