Heart Break

sage wrobel 2001 (NY)



I gave you my heart
Then you tore it apart
You made me feel loved
Because of you I'm in an emotional flood

Now because of you I feel unloved
Clearly with you i misjudged
I thought you were the one
But then you said we're done

I let my walls down
When you were around
I made the mistake
One i hope to never remake

At first you made my heart be fast
Who was i to think that'll last
You took everything I gave
Then threw me away with a wave

My heart is broken
Because of the way you've spoken
I've lost trust in love
Due to you giving me the shove

My heart will eventually heal
Which I intend to always conceal
Your in for a world of hurt
Hope your on high alert

My family's gunning for you
You bit off more than you could chew
You made the mistake of hurting me
That is a guarantee

You better start running
Because my family is coming
Your gonna regret meeting me
Many people would agree

You messed with the wrong person
Your life is about to worsen
I hope your ready
Because soon your life will be unsteady
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Submitted by princesss.66989 on February 25, 2021

Modified by princesss.66989 on February 25, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABX BXCC XXDD EEFF CCGG HHII JJKK LLKK CCKK
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 971
Words 203
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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