Analysis of Health

Edward Thomas 1878 (London Borough of Lambeth) – 1917 (Pas-de-Calais)



Four miles at a leap, over the dark hollow land,
To the frosted steep of the down and its junipers black,
Travels my eye with equal ease and delight:
And scarce could my body leap four yards.

This is the best and the worst of it -
Never to know,
Yet to imagine gloriously, pure health.

To-day, had I suddenly health,
I could not satisfy the desire of my heart
Unless health abated it,
So beautiful is the air in its softness and clearness, while
Spring
Promises all and fails in nothing as yet;
And what blue and what white is I never knew
Before I saw this sky blessing the land.

For had I health I could not ride or run or fly
So far or so rapidly over the land
As I desire: I should reach Wiltshire tired;
I should have changed my mind before I could be in Wales.
I could not love; I could not command love.
beauty would still be far off
However many hills I climbed over;
Peace would still be farther.
Maybe I should not count it anything
To leap these four miles with the eye;
And either I should not be filled almost to bursting with desire,
Or with my power desire would still keep pace.

Yet I am not satisfied
Even with knowing I never could be satisfied.
With health and all the power that lies
In maiden beauty, poet and warrior,
In Caesar, Shakespeare, Alcibiades,
Mazeppa, Leonardo, Michelangelo,
In any maiden whose smile is lovelier
Than sunlight upon dew,
I could not be as the wagtail running up and down
The warm tiles of the roof slope, twittering
Happily and sweetly as if the sun itself
Extracted the song
As the hand makes sparks from the fur of a cat:

I could not be as the sun.
Nor should I be content to be
As little as the bird or as mighty as the sun.
For the bird knows not the sun,
And the sun regards not the bird.
But I am almost proud to love both bird and sun,
Though scarce this Spring could my body leap four yards.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111011001101 10101101011001 10111101001 011110111 110100111 1011 11010100011 11111001 111100010111 0110101 11001010110011 1 10010101011 01101111101 0111111001 111111111111 11111001001 11010111110 1111110111101 1111111011 1011111 101011110 111110 101111110 11111101 0101111111101010 111100101111 111110 101101101110 110101011 01010100100 01011 1010010 010101111 11011 111110110101 01110111 100010110101 01001 10111101101 1111101 11111011 1101011110101 1011101 00101101 11111111101 11111110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,811
Words 362
Sentences 13
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 8, 12, 13, 7
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 241
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Edward Thomas

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