Analysis of Time Was



Time was
I threw away entire weeks
or two
crumpled up sweet nights,
rolled rich mornings like old paper,
stacked them to one side
Never seeing how in the end
I had miscounted,
Misjudged,
the better use of all the light
pooled along the horizon like
a silky, silent measuring stick.


Scheme ABCDEFGFHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 11 11010101 11 10111 11101110 11111 10101001 111 01 01011101 10100101 010101001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 270
Words 51
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 225
Words per stanza (avg) 51
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 04, 2023

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