Analysis of A Good-Bye

Edith Nesbit 1858 (Kennington, Surrey ) – 1924 (New Romney, Kent)



FAREWELL! How soon unmeasured distance rolls
Its leaden clouds between our parted souls!
How little to each other now are we--
And once how much I dreamed we two might be!
I, who now stand with eyes undimmed and dry
To say good-bye--

To say good-bye to all sweet memories,
Good-bye to tender questions, soft replies;
Good bye to hope, good-bye to dreaming too,
Good-bye to all things dear--good-bye to you,
Without a kiss, a tear, a prayer, a sigh--
Our last good-bye.

I had no chain to bind you with at all;
No grace to charm, no beauty to enthral;
No power to hold your eyes with mine, and make
Your heart on fire with longing for my sake,
Till all the yearning passed into one cry:
'Love, not good-bye!'

Ah, no--I had no strength like that, you know;
Yet my worst weakness was to love you so!
So much too well--so much too well--or ill--
Yet even that might have been pardoned still--
It would have been had I been you--you I!
But now--good-bye!

How soon the bitter follows on the sweet!
Could I not chain your fancy's flying feet?
Could I not hold your soul--to make you play
To-morrow in the key of yesterday--?
Dear--do you dream that I would stoop to try?
Ah, no--Good-bye!


Scheme AABBCC XXDDCC EEFFCC GGHHCC IIJJCC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (23%)
Metre 1111101 11010110101 1101110111 0111111111 111111101 1111 1111111100 1111010101 1111111101 1111111111 0101010101 10111 1111111111 1111110101 11011111101 11110110111 1101010111 1111 1111111111 1111011111 1111111111 1101111101 1111111111 1111 1101010101 111111101 1111111111 110001110 1111111111 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,188
Words 221
Sentences 14
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 177
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Edith Nesbit

Edith Nesbit (married name Edith Bland) was an English author and poet; she published her books for children under the name of E. Nesbit. She wrote or collaborated on more than 60 books of children's literature. She was also a political activist and co-founded the Fabian Society, a socialist organisation later affiliated to the Labour Party. more…

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