Analysis of Sleep



Sleep sneaks up on me while I am awake.
All of my energy it tries hard to take.
It grabs at me morning and evening.
It even bothers me while I am peeing.

Why does sleep have to be this way?
Taking its toll day after day.
It's like having a weight on my back.
Or pulling a train up a steep railroad track.

Just when I think I found the answer.
It is right there waiting like a cancer.
But I have found something to stop all that.
I will just lay down and take myself a nap.


Scheme AAXA BBCC DDXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1111111101 11110011111 111110010 1101011111 11111111 10111101 111001111 1100110111 111111010 1111101010 1111101111 1111101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 461
Words 99
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by Brokenoifvet on September 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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John Lowe

I rode as a bullrider on the pro rodeo circut for several years.I also was deployed to Iraq four times during OIF and was injured 3 times.My poems come from the heart break of being apart and the love of what I do and have done. more…

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