Analysis of my condolences
i offered my condolences to you
to show you.
i need you.
and i still love you.
but the pain in me, in more than i can bare.
as i stare at my life.
i still won't , you for my wife.
for the rest of my life.
but all i see in me , is my life,
is that for me?
so i can be free.
no, i'm not free.
all i won't is you, next to me.
so we can see, heaven someday.
what does it take ,
to fix the mistake.
that i made.
watching the tears.
fail from my eyes.
that i cry.
knowing someday,this day well come.
and i won't you by my side.
nowing that i offered my condolences,
will be anough, to seat you free
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101010011 111 111 01111 10101011111 111111 1111111 101111 111101111 1111 11111 1111 11111111 1111101 1111 11001 111 1001 1111 111 101111 0111111 1111010100 1111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 570 |
Words | 130 |
Sentences | 20 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 427 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 133 |
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Submitted on August 24, 2014
Modified on March 05, 2023
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