Analysis of Homs



Homs
Unsteady is the crown upon your head
Bashar al-Assad, King of Syria.
We, the children of Homs
Cry out for vengeance,
Blood for blood!
A life for a life!
Because your Russian tanks,
And your Alewite captains
Slaughter your own people!
Why! So that your woman
Can buy her shoes?
So that your ancestors
Can remember your insensitivity
And that of your father
Who also poured the blood
Of thousands just to keep his throne?
A curse upon you and your children!
And if we meet in the hereafter
I would gladly give up my heaven
To push you deeper in Hell.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1 0101010111 0110111100 101011 11110 111 01101 011101 01110 101110 111110 1101 11110 1010100100 011110 110101 11011111 010110110 011100010 111011110 1111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 533
Words 103
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 437
Words per stanza (avg) 103
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Submitted on April 28, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Walter Raniowski

Have been writing Poetry and short stories for more than 50 years. Self published several books of poems, `Songs from Under a Bridge, Songs From a Higrise, Songs from an Iglu, Songs from a Doctors office, Songs from a Church etc. more…

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