Analysis of Dying Inside
I feel like I'm dying inside
A little more each day
Nothing seems to matter anymore
Not even that the Holidays
Are coming up again this year.
I don't care what I do
Don't care at all if I do anything
I just want to be online to
Put my Poems on Poetry.com
And also to be on facebook.
Sometime again soon to see all
The pics and see what my family
And friends are going through
and what they all have been doing
And I want to put my posts on there to.
Why, Oh why can't I get online anymore
Nothing matters now , not even how I
Feel or how I'm doing..
I can't go to the Pool for Water Aerobics
Or be online any more at all.
I'm getting like the old Tortoise
I'm crawling deeper into the
shell that is me
I am a shell of the person
I used to be..
Faith S. Hudson
November 22, 2014
Scheme | X X A X X B C B D C E F B C B A X C X E X X D G F G X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111001 010111 10111001 1101010 11010111 111111 111111110 1111111 111011 0101111 1011111 010111100 011101 01111110 0111111111 111111101 1010111011 111110 111101110010 11110111 11010110 11010010 1111 11011010 1111 1110 010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 754 |
Words | 164 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 27 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 27 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 22 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 6 |
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Submitted on April 17, 2015
Modified on March 21, 2023
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