Analysis of Black Money

Sunil Bhatia 1971 (Allahabad)



Should I declare all my income
In the Voluntary Scheme?
Is it gonna help me anyways at all!
Is it gonna help the children
Playing naked in the Mall?
Is it gonna help the poor old man
In tatters outside the Movie Hall!
Is it gonna help us all
To get out of this Hell?
But most of all my friends
Will I be able ..to buy the new Opel!
Black Money..Don't take it all!
Black Money..why do I have to pay the toll!!
And then you shoot me with your questions
And all your Military Styles
Will you take me in the Navy
And will you keep me there for a while?
I hear Cannon Balls..
And there are Dying Men outside..
My Black Money is gonna keep me alive...


Scheme ABCDCECCFGHCIJKLMNOP
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101111 0010001 1110111011 11101010 1010001 111010111 010110101 1110111 111111 111111 11110110110 11111 111111101 011111110 0111001 11110010 011111101 11101 01110111 11101101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 626
Words 133
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 491
Words per stanza (avg) 131
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Submitted by Suniil_Bhatia on November 25, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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