Analysis of The Old Woman Says...



“You’ve got more past than future,”
she said without a smile

“The hours lost will not rewind,
your pendulum beguiled

“You’ve got more past than future,”
the hag said one last time

“Your legacy a broken spring
—whose clock no longer chimes”

(Valley Forge Memorial Bell Tower: March, 2021)


Scheme Ax xx Ax xx x
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110 110101 01011110 110001 1111110 011111 11000101 111101 10101001101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 299
Words 51
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by sage48 on March 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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