Analysis of Guardian From Hell



" 'Twas dark and stormy mi amigo
   When yonder lass wanted a home.
You turned her away from your door,
   Sent her shivering body back into the storm.

Fear, I should say, prevailed within her
   As she had no comfort offered.
You good as well may have killed her
   When you declined her a spot at your hearth.

Raise your glasses to a toast,
   Such a shameful thing to boast,
You killed the yonder lass so weak,
   Just so you could have some mead!"

Champagne and mead and something more
   Was much needed for the poor lad vexed sore.
"If only I'd known, Lord have pity on me!
   Trade me in her place, I'd take it gladly!"

If corpses could talk, she'd be the first,
   For in his mind he knew he heard
The soft voice of an angel sweet
   That he'd sent away from him only yester-eve.

"Poor lad, I am not dead, merely asleep,
   Bitter tears for me you shouldn't weep.
I was a mere stranger at your humble door
   When you yourself was oh so poor.

Look at midnight into heaven's sky
   For then you'll discern truths from lie.
My heart forever will be with you
   As I watch over everything you do."

When at midnight he opened his weary eyes
   Then fell away the world's disguise.
Gently, he tiptoed to the door so bright
   And before him beamed heaven's golden light.

Feather-like wings surrounded him instantly
   Bearing him up Heaven's staircase with glee.
"Surely, this must be a dream of joy!
   Please, with my mind do not toy!"

Before him now stood that poor sleeping girl
   And deep in his heart, emotion began to stir.
"Nay, dear lad, 'tis now your reality.
   Welcome home, with the Lord and I to be.

Forevermore the streets of gold you'll walk,
   Face to face, with all, you may talk.
Clearest of streams, purest of brooks,
   Into eternity you've now been took.

I told you once I'd forever watch your every move
   And now I know my heart belongs to you.
'Tis what led me straight to your humble door
   Though you yourself was very poor."

Opening his eyes, he was once more amazed.
   He sat up in bed feeling quite dazed.
Looking around, the lass he spotted.
   All dressed in black stood a flaming red-head.

"Thought 'twas Heaven I was in.
   Surely, you're dead, I saw it this mornin'!"
"Nay, dear lad. You can see dead I am not.
   I've come to take you where you thought not."

Her feathers unfurled from the sides of her gown,
   Dark and gray like ashes, softer than down.
Her face was radiant, so full of love
   He couldn't help but feel she was an angel from above.

"Take me away, oh dear angel of mine,
   For soon my lass, my heart will be thine.
For many a moon I've awaited this night
   So take me where your flaming locks shine bright!"

Away they flew towards the moon brightly shining
   And then they swept towards the earth's orange glowing.
Into the pits of the underworld did she take him
   Into the streets of gold did they forever live.

A guardian angel straight from Hell,
   A poor young lad now living swell,
When the heart calls you to your fate,
   'Tis your choice whether or not fate to embrace.


Scheme XXAX BCBX DDXX AAEE XCXX FFAG HHII JJKK EELL XBEE MMXX XIAG NNXX OOPP QQRR SSKK TTXX UUXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (39%)
Metre 11010101 11011001 11001111 101001010101 111101010 11111010 11111110 1101001111 1110101 1010111 11010111 1111111 01010101 1110101111 11011111011 1100111110 110111101 10111111 01111101 11101111011 1111111001 101111101 11011011101 11011111 11101101 11101111 110101111 111101011 1111101101 11010101 101110111 0011110101 10110101100 101110111 101110111 1111111 0111111101 010110100111 11111110 1011010111 1011111 11111111 10111011 0101001111 11111010111001 0111110111 1111111101 11011101 10011111101 111011011 100101110 1101101011 1110110 101111111 1111111111 111111111 01001101101 1011101011 0111001111 11011111110101 1101111011 111111111 11001101011 1111110111 011101011010 011101011010 010110101111 010111110101 010010111 01111101 10111111 11110111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 3,056
Words 570
Sentences 41
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 72
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted by RoseofVenus on January 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:56 min read
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Cheyenne Seaman

Born in PA in 2003. Raised in NC. Love to read. Mother, first & foremost. Poet & Story Writer. Carpenter, Tutor, Babysitter, Sister, Daughter. more…

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