Analysis of Be Careful What You Wish For



Victim of his own success…
the treadmill calls,
the hourglass broken
—casualty of what time denies

(The New Room: November, 2020)


Scheme XXXX X
Poetic Form Cinquain  (60%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1011101 011 01010 100011101 011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 129
Words 21
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on November 10, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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