Analysis of Silence

W. J. Turner 1889 (South Melbourne) – 1946 (Hammersmith )



It was bright day and all the trees were still
    In the deep valley, and the dim Sun glowed;
    The clay in hard-baked fire along the hill
    Leapt through dark trunks to apples green and gold,
    Smooth, hard and cold, they shone like lamps of stone:

They were bright bubbles bursting from the trees,
    Swollen and still among the dark green boughs;
    On their bright skins the shadows of the leaves
    Seemed the faint ghosts of summers long since gone,
    Faint ghosts of ghosts, the dreams of ghostly eyes.

There was no sound between those breathless hills.
    Only the dim Sun hung there, nothing moved;
    The thronged, massed, crowded multitude of leaves
    Hung like dumb tongues that loll and gasp for air:
    The grass was thick and still, between the trees.

There were big apples lying on the ground,
    Shining, quite still, as though they had been stunned
    By some great violent spirit stalking through,
    Leaving a deep and supernatural calm
    Round a dead beetle upturned in a furrow.

A valley filled with dark, quiet, leaf-thick trees,
    Loaded with green, cold, faintly shining suns;
    And in the sky a great dim burning disc! -
    Madness it is to watch these twisted trunks
    And to see nothing move and hear no sound!

Let's make a noise, Hey!... Hey!... Hullo! Hullo!


Scheme AXAXX BXCXX XXCXB DXXXX BXXXD A
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010101 0011000111 01011100101 1111110101 1101111111 1011010101 1001010111 111101101 1011110111 1111011101 1111011101 1001111101 011101011 1111110111 0111010101 1011010101 1011111111 11110010101 1001001001 1011010010 01011110111 1011110101 0001011101 1011111101 0111010111 11011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,312
Words 219
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 162
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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W. J. Turner

Walter James Redfern Turner (13 October 1889 – 18 November 1946) was an Australian-born, English-domiciled writer and critic. more…

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