Analysis of Back to You



The girl on the corner is flashing her legs.
The drunk at the station is down to the dregs.
I try not to answer each question that begs,
And I long for a train back to you.

The platform is crowded, with nowhere to sit.
It's dingy and draughty, and quite badly lit.
But I'll bide my time here and put up with it,
As I wait for a train back to you.

My nights have been empty without you to hold.
I've felt lost and lonely, if truth must be told;
And these city streets are not paved with gold,
So I'm taking a train back to you.

The man in the mirror is no friend of mine;
He's balding and puffy, and talks out of line.
He followed me here with a bottle of wine,
And we're boarding a train back to you!

Copyright © Robert Haigh, 2019


Scheme AAAB CCCB DDDB EEEB X
Poetic Form
Metre 01101011001 01101011101 11111011011 011101111 011101111 1100101101 11111101111 111101111 11111001111 11101011111 0110111111 111001111 01001011111 11001001111 11011101011 011001111 10101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 736
Words 151
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on June 22, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Robert Haigh

Robert Haigh is an amateur English poet, Musician and photographer. more…

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