Analysis of The gift still remains



As I sit thinking to myself man it's time for a change.

Cut away from all my loses not trying to be on the same mastake s.

Slow down pump the breaks.

Chop the head off these snakes.

They got my girl got life man how much more can they take.

I just need a Break.

A long vacation I've been awaiting.

I've had enough my life s been soo rough Satan s been surrounding me.

I keep hearing these voices in my head.

Hang it up big boss I think you've had enough.

As I grip the pistol grip shotty in my lap I get a feeling like nah nigga I feel bad as fuck.

Soo fall back you better before I bust.

A whole in your ass you must be Mad or Nuts.

And beware of them jelouse people who keep asking them questions these fools be wack as fuck.

My gift  has came pretty soon I'm gonna have the world calling my name.

People thinking I'm caught in the drain and I have no plans too ever change.
But this game feeds me and still I maintain.

So quit that loud mouth yapp n before home boi snatches your chain.

This davine energy peaking Nigga.

And it's not going to change.

Soo get your punch lines ready.

Because this gift still remains.

I'm off the chain.


Scheme A X B B C C X D X X E X X E X AF F C A D X F
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011111101 101111101101110111 11101 101111 1111111111111 11101 0101011010 110111111110110101 1110110011 11111111101 111010110111101011111111 1111100111 01011111111 001111101110110111111 11111011101011011 101011001011111101 1111101101 111111101111011 11100101 0111011 1111110 0111101 1101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,125
Words 229
Sentences 23
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by kalipdro on June 07, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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