Analysis of Abandoned Tears



I can’t cry anymore,
or mention your name

I can’t sleep through the night
with fury and shame

I can’t give anymore,
stakes gone from my claim

I can’t cry anymore
—tears salting the blame

(Dreamsleep: May, 2020)


Scheme Ab xb ab Ab x
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 11011 111101 11001 11101 11111 11101 11001 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 212
Words 38
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 32
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on May 17, 2020

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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