Analysis of Passing Beyond



I’m going to watch you die…
but before I do
I will foretell your story

The story of the White Bird
The Great Mystery
and the Silver Seed

The White Bird carries
in its talons
the Silver Seed of all mankind

A seed that will allow you
to move past what you have been afraid
of for so long

When the White Bird
passes overhead
it will drop the Silver Seed

You must be dead
before the seed
touches the ground

Then, the White bird
will turn into
the legendary Hawk of Thunder

And carry you off
into the land
of the great Wakan Tanka

The decision to leave
being yours
and yours alone

Passing beyond
what time has frozen
—passing beyond what then has been

(Pine Ridge South Dakota: August, 2011)


Scheme XAB CBD XXX AXE CFD FDX CAX XXE XXX XXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111 10111 1101110 0101011 01100 00101 01110 0110 01011111 0111011 111111101 1111 1011 10101 1110101 1111 0101 1001 1011 1101 01001110 01011 0101 10111 001011 101 0101 1001 11110 10011111 11101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 662
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 50
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 19, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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