Analysis of Ballad: Lorraine, Lorraine, Lorree

Charles Kingsley 1819 – 1875



'Are you ready for your steeple-chase, Lorraine, Lorraine, Lorree?
Barum, Barum, Barum, Barum, Barum, Barum, Baree,
You're booked to ride your capping race to-day at Coulterlee,
You're booked to ride Vindictive, for all the world to see,
To keep him straight, to keep him first, and win the run for me.
Barum, Barum,' etc.

She clasped her new-born baby, poor Lorraine, Lorraine, Lorree,
'I cannot ride Vindictive, as any man might see,
And I will not ride Vindictive, with this baby on my knee;
He's killed a boy, he's killed a man, and why must he kill me?'

'Unless you ride Vindictive, Lorraine, Lorraine, Lorree,
Unless you ride Vindictive to-day at Coulterlee,
And land him safe across the brook, and win the blank for me,
It's you may keep your baby, for you'll get no keep from me.'

'That husbands could be cruel,' said Lorraine, Lorraine, Lorree,
'That husbands could be cruel, I have known for seasons three;
But oh! to ride Vindictive while a baby cries for me,
And be killed across a fence at last for all the world to see!'

She mastered young Vindictive-Oh! the gallant lass was she,
And kept him straight and won the race as near as near could be;
But he killed her at the brook against a pollard willow-tree,
Oh! he killed her at the brook, the brute, for all the world to see,
And no one but the baby cried for poor Lorraine, Lorree.

Last poem written in illness.
Colorado, U.S.A.
June 1874.


Scheme AABCCX ACCC ABCC AACC CCACA XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11101110101011 1111111 111111011111 1111010110111 11111111010111 11100 1101110101011 1101010110111 011110101110111 11011101011111 011101001011 01110101111 01110101010111 11111101111111 1101110101011 11011101111101 11110101010111 011010111110111 11010101010111 01110101111111 11101010101011 111010101110111 0111010111011 11010010 010111 1
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,392
Words 265
Sentences 16
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 4, 5, 3
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 178
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 27, 2023

1:19 min read
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Charles Kingsley

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