Analysis of Gone



In memory of Martha K. Newton and Amanda P. Newton

and then I looked around.....

I stepped back and breath
Taking each breath like there's no more.
The rush of memories flood my mind
The tears started to flow
And my heart heavy with grief.

I wanted to ask "why Lord why"
But it only comes back in whispers
Like a raindrop following from the sky falling.

There's a time to morn
Remembering the times of our lives.
God knew what was best
In times like these----
Like times like these we need a Savior.

Remembering you---
I took a breath
And you've gone away
Sailed away to the sea so distant.

Remembering you---
I took  a breath
And now you're gone....
22 Aug. 2013


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Poetic Form
Metre 01001101100010110 011101 11101 10111111 011100111 011011 0111011 11011111 111011010 10110010110 10111 0100011101 11111 0111 111111010 01001 1101 01101 101101110 01001 1101 0111 10
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 651
Words 126
Sentences 12
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 5, 3, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by Kenneth R. Jenkins on November 02, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kenneth R. Jenkins

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