Analysis of Green with envy



If you only knew I was hanging by a thread...
barely wading in the water...
The way that you acted was like everything went wrong...
Wishin I had god to take away all the pain...
Standing in a sea of wealth bein the only one alive...
Bein in poverty having my life in my hands...
As long as you're alive I got it all...
Grass between my toes you in my arms feelings swell like the ocean...
Comin up crashing down....
Seems to be my only thrill...
This greed is bigger than you and me...
Can we come through it?
Will we stay friends?
It’s all falling away...
Gotta rise above & keep it together...
It’s all falling away...
Not feeling...
Not nothin...


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Poetic Form
Metre 111011110101 10100010 011110111011 11111101101 10001111010101 101001011011 1111011111 1011110111011010 11101 1111101 111101101 11111 1111 111001 1010111010 111001 110 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 643
Words 123
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 475
Words per stanza (avg) 123
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lindsay Mancano

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