Analysis of When I Touched Your Omnipresent Feet
When I shook hands with your Omnipotent grace; I felt as if I had shaken hands with the entire world,
When I ran with you on the shimmering sea shores; I felt as if I had run in harmony with the entire world,
When I conversed with you sitting on the opalescent cushion of velvety stars; I felt as if I had conversed with the entire world,
When I played hide and seek with you amidst the pugnacious body of fulminating Sun and black clouds; I felt as if I had played with the entire world,
When I ate food with you perched delectably on the sprawling tree leaf; I felt as if I had eaten food with the entire world,
When I wrote a letter to you profoundly lost in an ocean of surreal fantasy; I felt as if written letters to the entire world,
When I eloped with you after midnight to admire flamboyant fish swimming in the resplendent stream; I felt as if I had eloped with the entire world,
When I gallivanted on the horse with you at enchanting dawn; I felt as if I had gallivanted freely with the entire world,
When I whispered mysteriously in your omniscient ears; I felt as if I had whispered in the ears of the entire world,
When I smiled at your supremely sacrosanct visage; I felt as if I had smiled at the entire world,
When I admired your magnificently royal demeanor; I felt as if had admired the demeanor of the entire world,
When I sketched your unfathomably fabulous aura; I felt as if I had sketched the entire world,
When I relished your immortal caress over my serenely closed eyelids; I felt as if had relished the caress of the entire world,
When I stared unrelentingly at your spell binding countenance; I felt as if I had stared at the entire world,
When I inundated your towering body with festoons of roses and reinvigorating scent; I felt as if I had inundated the entire world,
When I sat for indefatigable number of hours in the presence of your revered company; I felt as if I had sat placidly with the entire world,
When I slept in the entrenchment of your stupendously alluring and sacred shadow; I felt as if I had slept in blissful synchrony with the entire world,
When I stood like an invincible fortress by your divinely form; audaciously prepared to take away any evil upon my miniscule stature before it tried to creep towards your Godly form; I felt as if I had stood ground for the entire world,
When I perceived your ingratiatingly boundless form incessantly in the top most compartments of my mind; I felt as if I had conceived each and every entity
existing in the entire world,
When I cried uncontrollably as you abruptly disappeared without the slightest of intimation; I felt as if I had cried for the entire world,
When I left my destiny wholesomely in your palms; I felt as if I had left the destiny of the entire world,
And when I touched your omnipresent feet; kissing your divine toes for being blessed upon with the unflinching prowess to fight life; I felt as if I had touched the feet of the entire world; the entire and colossal Universe.
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| Metre | 11111101001111111101100101 11111101001111111110100100101 11011110101101100111111101100101 11110111010010101110111111111100101 11111111101011111111101100101 111010110101011010110011111010100101 111111011010101100001011111111100101 1111011110101111111110100101 1110100001010111111110001100101 111110100100101111111100101 1101010100010010111110100010100101 1111110010111111100101 11101010011010100111111110001100101 1111111101001111111100101 111001100101111000100111111110000101 11110100010110001011011001111111100100101 11100010111010010111111110101100101 11111010010110101101110110100111001001111101110111111111100101 110111101010000110101111111110110100100 010000101 111010011010010101010101111111100101 1111100101111111110100100101 01111010110101111010110010101111111111011001010010001010 |
| Characters | 2,988 |
| Words | 554 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 22 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 23 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 104 |
| Words per line (avg) | 24 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 109 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
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