Analysis of The Eternal kiss



You came as a complete stranger in my life; tantalizing me an angel with your mystical flurry of exotic smiles,
While today you had become the glistening empathy in my eyes; the tears of rhapsody that I oozed unrelentingly; as the skies showered rain on parched soil.

You came as a complete stranger in my life; seducing me every now and again; with your enchanting shadow that swept nimbly past my dwindling countenance,
While today you had become every smile that passionately besieged my crimson lips; the mesmerizing pink that perennially enveloped its tragically devastated contours.

You came as a complete stranger in my life; retreating your palms mischievously; even as I brushed past their immaculate fingers like a crown prince,
While today you had become the color of my robust skin; the incredulously dancing pores that crept on my flesh; as I rejoiced in an everlasting dance; till the realms of eternity.

You came as a complete stranger in my life; disclosing to me your ethereal glimpse; as I frantically groped and stared into the winds of remotely infinite oblivion,
While today you had become the only hope that I harbored and possessed in my life; the perpetual ray of optimistic light; which was my ultimate savior wherever I went.

You came as a complete stranger in my life; flirtatiously whispering into my ears; as the Sun gloriously dimmed its light beyond the scarlet horizons,
While today you had become each word that I explicitly spoke; the melodious fountain of wonderful rhyme; that compassionately emanated from deep within my throat.

You came as a complete stranger in my life; pinching me on my cheek; and then disappearing entirely as the winds ferociously rebelled away from my shriveled
visage,
While today you become each dream I perceived; each zenith I kept indefatigably achieving; as the world deteriorated in morbid caverns of manipulative malice.

You came as a complete stranger in my life; tempting me like a voluptuously titillating mirage; into the innermost depths of untamed wilderness,
While today you had become the paths which I majestically rolled on; the silken carpet of dewdrops that tingled me beyond the most unprecedented summit
of ecstasy; as darkness unveiled.

You came as a complete stranger in my life; igniting passionate webs of insatiable desire; the instants I witnessed your charismatically fading form,
While today you had become every droplet of water I slurped down my mouth; the very reason that I inhaled breath; as all in this colossal planet were inevitably dying.

You came as a complete stranger in my life; winking at me voraciously with your enigmatically mysterious looks,
While today you had become the irrefutably righteous voice of my conscience; propelling me philanthropically to serve all mankind.

And you came as a complete stranger in my life; making me entirely unknown to your religion and form; as I stumbled head on upon your footprints; towards the
obdurately treacherous ground,
While today you had become the eternal kiss of my existence; the immortal love which entrenched my heart so formidably; that it kept throbbing; even as my soul
had bonded entirely with the Creator.


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Words 522
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 3, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 108
Words per line (avg) 22
Letters per stanza (avg) 259
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Submitted by nikhilparekh on October 14, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nikhil Parekh

Nikhil Parekh , ( born August 27 ; 1977 ) from Ahmedabad , India - is a Love Poet and 10 time National Record holder for his Poetry with the Limca Book of Records India , which is India's Best Book of Records , also Ranked 2nd in the World officially to Guinness Book of World Records . He is an author of - ' LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY ' , which has a Print Length of 5254 pages on the Amazon Kindle . The Poet's style of Poetry / literature is unique and has never ever been written before or experimented on the mortal planet by any mortal . Though his Poetry / literature is normal and natural . 10 Different National Records held by Parekh with the Limca Book of Records India are for - (1) Being the First Indian Poet to be published / featured in McGill English Dictionary of Rhyme which is the World's Number 1 English Rhyming Dictionary - for his poem: Come Lets Embrace our New Religion (2) Being the First Indian Poet to have won Poet of the Year Award at the Canadian Federation of Poets which is Canada's National Poetry Body endorsed by Governor General of Canada (3) Being the First Indian Poet to be published in a Commonwealth Newsletter for his poem on AIDS which is 'Aids doesn't kill. Your Attitude kills (4) Being the First Indian Poet to win an EPPIE award for best poetry e-book (5) Writing the most number of letters to and receiving the most number of replies from World Leaders and World Organizations (6) Being the First Indian Poet to be Goodwill Ambassador to the International Goodwill Treaty for World Peace - GoodwillTreaty.org (7) Being the First Indian Poet whose Poems have been made into Films at Youtube.com - The World's largest video sharing website (8) Being the 1st Indian Poet to be featured for his Poetry Book - 'Love versus Terrorism- Poems on Anti Terror, Peace' , at Wattpad.com - The World's most popular ebook community and largest website for reading books on mobile phones (9) Being the first Indian Poet whose video reciting a Poem on Nelson Mandela , has been placed at the official website of the Government of South Africa (10) Having authored LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY - which is of Print Length 5254 pages and currently has approximately 1.15 million words , financially selling in the Amazon.com Kindle Store United States at - http://www.amazon.com/dp/B003Y8XLKQ . The Indian Poet has written thousands of varied poems on - God , Peace , Love , Anti Terrorism , Friendship , Life , Death , Environment, Wildlife , Mother , Father , Children , Parenthood , Humanity , Social Cause , Women empowerment , Poverty , Lovers , Brotherhood . His Books and Poems have had millions of viewers and downloads on the Internet . Parekh is an author of 47 varied Books which include - 1 God ( volume 1 to volume 4 ) , The Womb ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , Love Versus Terrorism ( Part 1 to Part 2 ) , You die; I die - Love Poems ( Part 1 to Part 16 ) , Life = Death ( volume 1 to volume 10 ), The Power of Black ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , If you cut a tree; you cut your own mother , Hide and Seek ( part 1 to part 8 ) , Longest Poem written by Nikhil Parekh - Only as Life . These Books comprise of nearly a 7000 pages of his Poetry in their entirety . The Poet's Poetry has had the patronization of several versatile World Leaders including the Queen of England . Visit http://nikhilparekh.net ; the webpage . more…

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