Analysis of Share With me
Share with me your eyes; not because I was horrendously blind,
But because I am sure; that together our sight combined; would alleviate all our blind compatriots towards corridors of indispensably optimistic light.
Share with me your breath; not because my lungs abhorred to breathe the
disdainfully polluted air outside,
But because I am sure; that together our passion combined; would ignite fireballs of untamed rhapsody; in the heart of the cold blooded night.
Share with me your hands; not because all my fingers felt insipidly weak; to hoist even a minuscule object from soil,
But because I am sure; that together our fortitude combined; would scrap every iota of evil; march unflinchingly towards a celestially blissful humankind.
Share with me your mind; not because my brain stared like a baseless idiot into fathomless expanses of empty space,
But because I am sure; that together our intelligence combined; would mitigate all indiscriminate racialism from hateful souls lingering on the planet; philanthropically assist all those dreadfully maimed; to the euphoric winds of cloud nine.
Share with me your legs; not because my feet melted like a ludicrously pathetic ant; under the most nimble rays of sunshine,
But because I am sure; that together our stride combined; would evacuate all parasitic traitors from the periphery of our motherland; trigger cloudbursts of resilience in
all lackadaisical living kind.
Share with me your ears; not because I showed no reaction at all; even as devastating earthquakes rattled civilizations to raw ash,
But because I am sure; that together our hearing combined; would empathize with each morbidly shivering organism in this world; bring those to absolute justice; who were incessantly tyrannizing mankind.
Share with me your voice; not because I stammered like an intermittently nervous shadow; on each word that stumbled from my mouth,
But because I am sure; that together our sound combined; would inundate this fathomless globe with ingratiating melody; profusely enriching the lives of
all those engulfed with inexplicable despair.
Share with me your shoulders; not because I didn't possess an iota of muscle in my arms; collapsing like a pack of frigid cards; at the tiniest insinuation of the capricious winds,
But because I am sure; that together our power combined; would deluge the lives of those miserably orphaned since childhood with courageous light; transporting them to a land more beautifully enticing than paradise.
Share with me your soul; not because my deplorably empty entity; wavered uncertainly between the aisles of gorgeous heaven; and malicious hell,
But because I am sure; that together our benevolence combined; would; instill the fabulously wonderful elements of existence in waywardly loitering organisms; catapult them back to their most enthralling rudiments of cherished life.
And share with me your heart; not because the beats in mine sporadically fluttered towards the caverns of obsolete oblivion; tottering infinite kilometers beneath the grave; even while robustly alive,
But because I am sure; that together our love combined; would; invincibly immortalize the spirit of uninhibited freedom; the divinely spirit to live and let live; bonding for times immemorial; the rich; poor; and impoverished; alike.
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Metre | 11111101111001 10111110101010110101101010001100110101 111111011101110 1010111 10111110101010011011011100001101101 11111101111011111100101011 1011111010101001111000101101101011010 1111110111110101000110101101 10111110101001000111010010010011011001010101111001100101111 1111110111101010000101100110111 101111101010101101010101010010011010101101000 10100101 11111101111010111011001100010111 1011111010101001110111001001000111111010100100111 1111110111110100101111110111 10111110101010111011110100100010010011 11011010001 1111101011100110101100110101011101101000010100101 10111110101010011100111100010111010101011011100010110 11111101111010010010001011101000101 10111110101001000110101000100100101001100100101111111001101 011111101010101001001010110010010010001001011011001 10111110101010111010001010100100010101101110110100011001001 |
Characters | 3,287 |
Words | 514 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 3, 2, 2, 3, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 118 |
Words per line (avg) | 22 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 271 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 51 |
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