Analysis of Just Me And My Creator
No ornaments of gold needed; to embellish my body,
No chunks of land needed; for me to tread blissfully on this earth,
No flames of fire needed; to warm me and illuminate my night,
No streams of water needed; to wash myself and rejuvenate my senses to the pinnacle of ecstasy,
No island of Sun needed; to impart warmth to my life,
No strawberry sweets needed; to placate my dying taste buds,
No rainbow in the sky needed; to vivaciously glimmering my eyes,
No sparkling slabs of glass needed; in which I could sight my reflection,
No salt needed; to add pinches of exotic taste to my food,
No grandiloquent watch needed; to accurately apprise me of every second unleashing,
No enchanting music needed; to pacify my agitated senses,
No tantalizing dance needed; to wake me up from dreary sleep,
No gaudy clothes needed; to sequester me from bizarre cold,
No morsels of rice and curd needed to appease my insatiable hunger,
No spurious armory of smiles needed; to unrelentingly shower upon me droplets of pure rain,
No tears of empathy needed; to sympathize with me in my times of affliction and distress,
No books of literature needed to; enrich my knowledge about the historical times,
No cherries and wine needed; to entertain me beyond the point of no control,
No draughts of cool air needed; to wipe of the sweat trickling down my nape,
No bundles of currency needed; to execute all my desires to lavishly spend,
No bombastic attention needed; to escalate me to the corridors of supreme fame,
No cushions of grass needed; to shield my feet from a ground laid with acerbic thorns,
No blood needed; to circulate in my body granting me the tenacity to gush forward,
No ideals needed; to chisel a new and philosophical chapter in life,
No lights needed; to guide me ahead after stringently breaking through the darkness of the gruesome night,
No palaces needed; to serve me oligarchic cuisine; with the triangular crown placed fancily on my head,
No bones needed; to fortify my body; grant me the resilience to fight against the uncouth society,
No garlands needed; to felicitate me sanctimoniously; loud speakers announcing my presence in every road and street,
No dreams needed; to tingle the chords of rampant imagination; place me in a paradise of lost fairies,
No love needed; to maneuver me into a world of passionate romance; ignite unburned desires of my soul,
No breath needed; to peacefully meditate; carry on the chapter of harmonious existence,
just me and my CREATOR; staring profoundly at each Other; with my head knelt in meek submission in His lap; and the omnipotent power in His palms; besieging my heart with perennial happiness; putting me to an eternal sleep; with the world failing miserably this time to disturb me.
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| Metre | 110011101010110 1111101111100111 11110101110010011 11110101110010110101001100 11011101011111 11011011011011 11001101110011 11011110011111010 111011110101111 1010011011000011110010010 10101010110110010 110011011111101 110110101011011 1101101101011010010 11001001110111001110111 11110010110110111010001 11110001010111001001001 1100110101101011101 11111101110110111 1101100101101101011001 1010010101101101001011 11011101111101110101 11101100110101001001110 1011011001001001001 1110111011010010101010101 110010111101100100111111 1110110110110010011010110100 11101010111100101100100101 11101100111000101100101110 11101010101011100010101010111 111011001010101010100010 1101010100101110111101010011000100100110101110100100101110101101101000111011 |
| Characters | 2,739 |
| Words | 470 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 31 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 32 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 69 |
| Words per line (avg) | 15 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 71 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 15 |
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