Analysis of Immortally Dead



If mercilessly gouging both my eyes meant that; nobody on this boundless planet would ever be born pathetically blind once again; then gouge them this very minute and without the slightest of circumspection; O! Almighty Lord,

If ruthlessly snatching all my wealth meant that; nobody on this fathomless planet would ever  be born disastrously poor once again; then snatch it away this very minute and without the tiniest of skepticism; O! Almighty Lord,

If barbarically decimating both my arms and legs meant that; nobody on this infinite planet would ever  be born treacherously maim once again; then decimate them
this very minute and without the most insipid of comprehension; O! Almighty Lord,

If murderously extricating all my repertoire of charismatic smiles meant that; nobody on this timeless planet would ever  be born morbidly impoverished once again; then extricate them this very minute and without the most infinitesimal of deliberation; O!
Almighty Lord,

If ominously pulverizing all my voluptuously exotic beauty meant that; nobody on this fascinating planet would ever be born lecherously ugly once again; then
it this very minute and without the most minuscule of contemplation; O! Almighty Lord,

If satanically emptying my stomach even of its last morsel of tantalizing food meant that; nobody on this everlasting planet would ever be born devastatingly hungry once again; then empty it this very minute and without the most frigid of speculation; O! Almighty Lord,

If diabolically numbing the chords of melody in my throat meant that; nobody on this gigantic planet would ever be born ludicrously dumb once again; then numb them this very minute and without the most evanescent of thought; O! Almighty Lord,

If invidiously tricking my senses into a dungeon of venomously lethal scorpion meant that; nobody on this bountiful planet would   ever be born manipulatively cheated once again; then trick them this very minute and without the most ethereal of pondering; O! Almighty Lord,

If salaciously exploiting every iota of my ravishingly titillating flesh meant that; nobody on this endless planet would ever be born tyrannically mutilated once
again; then exploit it this very minute and without the most diminutive of rumination; O! Almighty Lord,

If heinously stealing all my ability to magically discern the cadence of piquant sound meant that; nobody on this enchanting planet would ever be born horrendously deaf once again; then steal it this very minute and without the most inconsequential of
cogitation; O! Almighty Lord,

If insidiously poisoning every element of my robustly scarlet blood with debilitating disease meant that; nobody on this mesmerizing planet would ever be born
brutally incapacitated once again; then poison it this very minute and without the most inconspicuous of musing; O! Almighty Lord,

If horrifically inflicting my flamboyantly glimmering eyeballs with an unfathomable ocean of despairing tears meant that; nobody on this blistering planet would ever be born pathetically lamenting once again; then inflict them this very minute and without the most minutest of pensiveness; O! Almighty Lord,

If cannibalistically snapping every iota of my spell binding memory meant that; nobody on this marvelous planet would ever be born insanely lunatic once again;
then snap it this very minute and without the most lackadaisical of reflection; O! Almighty Lord,

If deplorably annihilating all job opportunities for me even though I brilliantly dazzled meant that; nobody on this gorgeous planet would ever be born
staggeringly unemployed once again; then annihilate them this very minute and without the most capricious of thinking; O! Almighty Lord,

If savagely destroying every trace of my resplendently twinkling reflection meant that; nobody on this majestic planet would ever be born disparagingly orphaned once again; then destroy it this very minute and without the most remotest of afterthoughts; O! Almighty Lord,

If maliciously inebriating my patriotic will power to unflinchingly fight meant that; nobody on this glorious planet would ever be born nonchalantly sluggish once again; then inebriate it this very minute and without the most infinitesimal of
brooding; O! Almighty Lord,

If manipulatively corrupting my righteous conscience with dungeons of blood sucking depravation meant that; nobody on this magical planet would ever be born
ungainly guilty once again; then corrupt it this very minute and without the most ephemeral of consideration; O! Almighty Lord,

If devilishly massacring every puff of my blissfully cascading breath meant that; nobody on this perpetual planet would be ever be born tragically dead once
again; then massacre it this very minute and without the most obsolete of mulling; O! Almighty Lord,
And if uncouthly betraying my perennially throbbing heart meant that; nobody on this invincible planet would ever be born remorsefully lonely once again; then betray it this very minute and without the most faintest of deliberation; O! Almighty Lord,

For if just extinguishing a single life of mine; could astoundingly proliferate into a countless more celestial lives; bequeath upon the world its lost quota of jubilant happiness; then I would feel the most privileged organism O! Almighty Lord; to be
immortally dead.


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Characters 5,291
Words 827
Sentences 21
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 3, 2
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 136
Words per line (avg) 26
Letters per stanza (avg) 230
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Nikhil Parekh

Nikhil Parekh , ( born August 27 ; 1977 ) from Ahmedabad , India - is a Love Poet and 10 time National Record holder for his Poetry with the Limca Book of Records India , which is India's Best Book of Records , also Ranked 2nd in the World officially to Guinness Book of World Records . He is an author of - ' LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY ' , which has a Print Length of 5254 pages on the Amazon Kindle . The Poet's style of Poetry / literature is unique and has never ever been written before or experimented on the mortal planet by any mortal . Though his Poetry / literature is normal and natural . 10 Different National Records held by Parekh with the Limca Book of Records India are for - (1) Being the First Indian Poet to be published / featured in McGill English Dictionary of Rhyme which is the World's Number 1 English Rhyming Dictionary - for his poem: Come Lets Embrace our New Religion (2) Being the First Indian Poet to have won Poet of the Year Award at the Canadian Federation of Poets which is Canada's National Poetry Body endorsed by Governor General of Canada (3) Being the First Indian Poet to be published in a Commonwealth Newsletter for his poem on AIDS which is 'Aids doesn't kill. Your Attitude kills (4) Being the First Indian Poet to win an EPPIE award for best poetry e-book (5) Writing the most number of letters to and receiving the most number of replies from World Leaders and World Organizations (6) Being the First Indian Poet to be Goodwill Ambassador to the International Goodwill Treaty for World Peace - GoodwillTreaty.org (7) Being the First Indian Poet whose Poems have been made into Films at Youtube.com - The World's largest video sharing website (8) Being the 1st Indian Poet to be featured for his Poetry Book - 'Love versus Terrorism- Poems on Anti Terror, Peace' , at Wattpad.com - The World's most popular ebook community and largest website for reading books on mobile phones (9) Being the first Indian Poet whose video reciting a Poem on Nelson Mandela , has been placed at the official website of the Government of South Africa (10) Having authored LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY - which is of Print Length 5254 pages and currently has approximately 1.15 million words , financially selling in the Amazon.com Kindle Store United States at - http://www.amazon.com/dp/B003Y8XLKQ . The Indian Poet has written thousands of varied poems on - God , Peace , Love , Anti Terrorism , Friendship , Life , Death , Environment, Wildlife , Mother , Father , Children , Parenthood , Humanity , Social Cause , Women empowerment , Poverty , Lovers , Brotherhood . His Books and Poems have had millions of viewers and downloads on the Internet . Parekh is an author of 47 varied Books which include - 1 God ( volume 1 to volume 4 ) , The Womb ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , Love Versus Terrorism ( Part 1 to Part 2 ) , You die; I die - Love Poems ( Part 1 to Part 16 ) , Life = Death ( volume 1 to volume 10 ), The Power of Black ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , If you cut a tree; you cut your own mother , Hide and Seek ( part 1 to part 8 ) , Longest Poem written by Nikhil Parekh - Only as Life . These Books comprise of nearly a 7000 pages of his Poetry in their entirety . The Poet's Poetry has had the patronization of several versatile World Leaders including the Queen of England . Visit http://nikhilparekh.net ; the webpage . more…

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