Analysis of He Was Our Creator
He was the towering pinnacle of the mountain; while we were all minuscule bits of stone strewn all around the surface in tandem,
He was the spiraling flame of fire towards the sky; while we were all obsolete wisps of smoke gasping for breath in vicinity,
He was the blistering island of majestic sun; while we were all his infinite rays,
He was the entire opulence in the universe; while we were just his proprietors to judiciously dispense it,
He was the entire assemblage of sea water rising high with turbulent storms; while we were his boundless fish that sank to the bottom,
He was the mammoth boulder of scintillating diamond; while we were the glow he emanated; soon to fade in dying light,
He was the fortified and invincible wall of the fortress; while we were his half burnt and red bricks,
He was the colossal battlefield which stretched till eternity; while we were his valiant soldiers fighting to protect our country,
He was the vast desert with golden brown sands; while we were his thorny cactus; that defended his territory,
He was the countless sheep wandering around the globe; while we were the droplets of frosty milk which he yielded for survival,
He was the tree that sky rocketed beyond all limits of comprehension in the cosmos; while we were his succulent and energy imparting fruits,
He was the gargantuan beehive that inhabited every corner of this earth; while we were the rivulets of honey that oozed from his surface intermittently,
He was the solitary lotus mesmerizing all in the pond; while we were his several petals floating nimbly on the surface of transparent water,
He was the singular and biggest animal in the world; while we were many of his timid mice; which he had procreated to evolve earth,
He was the longest biscuit of sugar ever found on the planet; while we were unfathomable sweetness he produced; to titillate the atmosphere,
He was the most melodious bird flying towards unsurpassable victory; while we were all his different tunes and moods,
He was the all the heat that existed in the world; while we were all his multiple globules of sweat dribbling down in synchronized harmony,
He was the robust mass of flesh marching a billion steps at a time; while we were his conglomerate of bones which assumed different shapes; proportions and color,
And he was the first father of this Planet; the very first entity who put his foot on this earth; the first person to propagate language all around; the first individual to segregate wild mass of water and land into enchanting continents; and the deity from whom all of us molecules spawned and evolved; he was our Creator.
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Metre | 11010010010101101101111101010010 11010011100101110110111101100100 1101001010101110111001 110010100001011011010010100011 1100100101110101110011101101111010 110101011101100111001110101 110100010011010110111011 11001010111010011011010101011010 110110110111101101010101100 1101011000101110010110111101010 1101111000111010100010110110001000101 110010011010010010111110011101111100100 1101001010010011101101010101010101010 110100010100001110101110111110101011 110101011010110101100100010101110010 1101010011001110011011100101 1101011010001110111001111001010100 1100111110010110111010100111011001010010 011011011100101100111111101101101010101010011011110010101010000100111111010011110010 |
Characters | 2,622 |
Words | 455 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 19 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 112 |
Words per line (avg) | 24 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
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